Showing Emotion (Morning Session)
The morning session of the From-Home Retreat (2020) was on showing emotion. The replay is below. I’ll also be adding an addendum video in which I examine some of the shortcomings of the passages for examination.
You can access the handouts below:
- Emotions Excerpts
- “The Raft” by Stephen King
- Passages for Examination
And the slides: Showing Emotion Slides.
Here, too, by the way, is that Louise Harnby article I referenced: Identifying Showing and Telling
Feel free to chime in on the comments at the bottom of the page or email me if you have other questions: td@stormwritingschool.com
For those who registered for the whole weekend, you can check out the Panel replay and the Writing Attraction replay.
Thanks for attending!
And here’s that addendum I mentioned. It’s not a very polished video, as you’ll see (complete with interruptions by kids and dog). But I hope this ties together some of the loose ends.